Send me one of your presentations for a free critique including overall notes and slide-by-slide annotations.  I'll look at audience focus, wordiness, clutter, legibility and include suggestions on eliminating bullet lists, use of animation and other techniques.

Please limit your submission to about twenty slides.

I'll be happy to sign a non-disclosure agreement, if neccessary.

Call or E-mail me and attach your presentation and/or NDA.

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(You know we can't do this all day...)